WRITING A THESIS
I. A THESIS IS THE MAIN IDEA OF THE ESSAY, THE BASIC STAND YOU TAKE, OR
YOUR OPINION ON A SUBJECT
A THESIS IS NOT A TITLE, AN ANNOUNCEMENT, AN ABSOLUTE FACT, A
GENERAL SUBJECT
EXAMPLES:
TITLE - THE TRUTH ABOUT THE VIETNAM WAR
ANNOUNCEMENT - MY SUBJECT ABOUT VIETNAM
ABSOLUTE FACT - THE VIETNAM WAR ENDED IN 1973
GENERAL SUBJECT- VIETNAM
THESIS STATEMENT- THE VIETNAM WAR DIVIDED THE COUNTRY INTO
HAWKS AND DOVES.
II. A THESIS STATEMENT IS THE IDEA THAT YOU WILL DEVELOP AND DEFEND IN
YOUR ESSAY.
YOUR PRIMARY PURPOSE IS TO PERSUADE THE READER THAT YOUR THESIS IS A
VALID ONE. YOUR STATEMENT SHOULD CONTAIN TWO ESSENTIAL ELEMENTS:
1. A LIMITED SUBJECT
2. A CONTROLLING PURPOSE OR COMMENT ABOUT THE SUBJECT
EXAMPLES:
SUBJECT CONTROLLING THE PURPOSE
THE CIVIL WAR - HAD THREE ECONOMIC CAUSES, MORAL ISSUES,
STATES RIGHTS, AND SLAVERY
III. LIMITING THE TOPIC: A GENERAL TOPIC IS MUCH TOO BROAD TO GIVE THE ESSAY
FOCUS. THE TOPIC MUST BE NARROWED DOWN AND MADE SPECIFIC OR YOUR
ESSAY WILL BE A DISASTER.
EXAMPLES:
GENERAL TOPIC - WAR
NARROWED TOPIC - THE AMERICAN CIVIL WAR
MORE NARROWED TOPIC - THE BATTLE OF GETTYSBURG
SPECIFIC TOPIC - THE UNION STRATEGY AT GETTYSBURG
THESIS STATEMENT:
THE ULTIMATE DEFEAT OF THE CONFEDERACY AT GETTYSBURG WAS
CAUSED BY
THE UNION
STRATEGY OF TAKING THE HIGH GROUND AND FORCING THE ENEMY TO
COME TO THEM.